You married your sister
No wonder it ended in divorce
You murdered your brother
and never showed any remorse.
You used to be a gay undertaker,
now you are a dead body maker.
what next will you do?
Named for a passage way
because you’re just passing through
the characters you inhabit.
Stay away from Richard Kelly,
he’ll make you play a psycho rabbit.
You talk to your dead father.
I hadn’t thought about how weird your show is until just now.
“This drivel shows nothing but contempt for the reader. Why are you taking this class if you are going to submit such rubbish? This is not even a first draft. You think the conceit of confusing the actor and the character is amusing, but its tired, and your attempt is half arsed. The ending would be a let down, if there was anything to come down from. And what’s with the Donnie Darko crap suddenly popping up? Worthless, both you and the so-called poem.”
Sorry Mum. I know, she wasn’t his real sister any way. But Harry is supposed to be his real father.