Here is a poem about fish for Good Friday. Its not a very good poem, because really it is a song. If I did podcasting, you would be able to hear the true beauty of it. Lines 5 & 6 really have to be belted out. I can imagine Shirley Bassey doing a great job of it. She should have recorded it straight after ‘Gold Finger’. Except of course it wasn’t written then. Technicalities keep getting in the way of the development of my artistic career. Babs would probably do a good job, but she’s a bit nasally for it. “Dream” is stretched out, to represent the endless nightmare that being a fish is, having to continually move, never able to rest or sleep, until the relief of being eaten.
All the spider webs are glistening in the light of the full moon. If I go outside, they’ll run all over me. And they’re huge.
Corey the pondering clown had a competition for a poem with this title. I wasn’t interested in the competition [there wasn’t a million dollar prize 🙂 ], but this idea and this image came to me in the early hours of the morning. (It is very quiet here, so sometimes it is harder to sleep. When you hear a noise, it is harder to convince yourself that it is not them coming to get you. One day, it will be.) The cliches are deliberate. He might be happy, but in many ways it is very sad, that his happiness comes from scraping through, from making it. For those of us who struggle though, you get through one day at a time, each little triumph, and then one day, there are no more days to get through. Perhaps that is the final victory. Then what comes after? Don’t judge him too harshly if there are no references to loved ones here – whose feet did he keep shod, who did he protect from the wolf? His love is expressed practically, and that is the greatest poem, and it is not one that I can write.
A bit of a contrast with “Young Love, with scar” below, which I like more, but if I only every wrote down the one I liked the best, there would only be one (actually, there would be none, because that is the fatal flaw of perfectionism).